“London Bridge Hospital” I told Sam when he asked me about the hospital I chose.
“Well buddy did you get an appointment with the doctor?”
“Yeah”
“Which doctor?”
“Jason Auld.”
“I simply hope that you come back to the training ground as soon as possible.”
I told the same thing to the doctor.
“Don’t worry young man you will make it… I assure you of that…” was the doctor’s reply.
“Oh thank you doctor thanks a lot…” Evie became emotional and tears rolled down.
“Doc please make it fast, I can’t wait to have him back in the ground” Sam said in his usual tone.
“So, coming Friday that is 5th of Feb we are having your surgery…” said the doctor.
“Ok” I replied.
It was late in the evening when Sam left us. Evie and I were alone in the house.
“Evie…” I called her.
“Yeah”
“That thing last night… I am sorry”
“Don’t be… it was mutual wasn’t it?”
“Mutual?”
“Yes it was mutual I had willingly done it…”
“After all this is over Evie….”
“Don’t say a thing….we will be together…”
“Thank you for everything you are doing for me…”
“Now now don’t start it all over again”
“Start what?”
“You naughty boy…acting as if you don’t know a thing…”
“Oh that thing…. I’d love to have it as many times as you would like.”
“Alright I give up… but see didn’t I tell you that everything would be alright?”
“You were right…”
“But let go of me now… I have to prepare dinner”
“Go you are free.”
She left…
After dinner we talked a bit and then we fell asleep…
Dude when did you take to writing? And when did you get so good at it? I am speechless. You should write more .you have really got some serious skill dont let it go to waste. Your story "road to my dream" was awesome hope you will add more chapters to it. One last question- is evie a made up character does she really exist in YOUR life?;-)
ReplyDeleteNOT YET BUT I WUD LUV HER 2 EXIST....DATS ALL....ND I WILL ADD MORE CHAPTERS...
ReplyDeleteWell written dude....this really reminds me of the movie Slapshot...please continue...you seem to be able to create good characters and making them stand out according to their own uniqueness...I'd say the dialogue needs a bit of polish but other than that, its great. 8/10
ReplyDeletei will work on it....but truth be told dis is my own idea nd not on lines of anything else...i hope future posts wil clarify dat...
ReplyDeleteIndeed, but unfortunately......he sya he forgot about the story.Hope he gets inspired from Football World Cup!!! and writes this epic!!!XD
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